A night, where the moon shines so bright
when all seems so unbleached and right
Darkness covers the sky in a satin weave
an illusion meant only to deceive
Waiting for that shimmering light
which fortifies to render respite
It is but a matter of time
when things return to the dust and grime
And it begins all over again
a recurrence, to comprehend is truly inane.
19 comments:
Nice One
Thanks dumms :) :)
nice one mams:D
thanks maams :)
Good usage of words! Brilliant theme!
Loved it mate!
Thanks CM :)
Well written kano. It truly reflects your state of mind, if I have interpreted it right! But fret not, it is but the cycle of life, of ups and downs, of dark and light..and the darkness and downs we surely must fight! :)
very true kane....u almost write off another poem there pamms :) :)
To rhyme, is never a crime Panku ;) Hehe...ok I shall stop :P
you never should stop
when you are on top
let the words flow
and let the rhymes grow ;) ;)
Bravo :) Love it :)
hehe
thank you thank you
i try not to outdo ;)
wah wah wah nammallu obba kuvempu idhane
kuvempu yella doddu maathu maga...yeno alpa swalpa baritivi naavu devra daye inda ashte
loved the flow...:) keep wroting...
p.s: pardon me m not a regular reader...but i ll keep droppin in now n den:)
blogrollin u!:)
seems like u had a bad day when you wrote it
expressed it well..
nicely written!
@divsi
Thank you
Need to update regularly too for u to drop in and find new stuff :-D
@nasha
Thank u
Guess it was a pretty bad day
Dude what's your name
your poem wasn't lame
i think your fans will increase
as long as you continue to cater their needs
keep these poems coming
your talent is mind-blowing
LOL
Good one mate
thanks :)
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