Monday, January 24, 2011

Illusion

A night, where the moon shines so bright
when all seems so unbleached and right
Darkness covers the sky in a satin weave
an illusion meant only to deceive

Waiting for that shimmering light
which fortifies to render respite

It is but a matter of time
when things return to the dust and grime

And it begins all over again
a recurrence, to comprehend is truly inane.

19 comments:

Chinmay said...

Nice One

Karthik[:)] said...

Thanks dumms :) :)

CHEEKU said...

nice one mams:D

Karthik[:)] said...

thanks maams :)

adarkmarshbench said...

Good usage of words! Brilliant theme!

Loved it mate!

Karthik[:)] said...

Thanks CM :)

Ashwini said...

Well written kano. It truly reflects your state of mind, if I have interpreted it right! But fret not, it is but the cycle of life, of ups and downs, of dark and light..and the darkness and downs we surely must fight! :)

Karthik[:)] said...

very true kane....u almost write off another poem there pamms :) :)

Ashwini said...

To rhyme, is never a crime Panku ;) Hehe...ok I shall stop :P

Karthik[:)] said...

you never should stop
when you are on top
let the words flow
and let the rhymes grow ;) ;)

Ashwini said...

Bravo :) Love it :)

Karthik[:)] said...

hehe
thank you thank you
i try not to outdo ;)

Rama said...

wah wah wah nammallu obba kuvempu idhane

Karthik[:)] said...

kuvempu yella doddu maathu maga...yeno alpa swalpa baritivi naavu devra daye inda ashte

divsi said...

loved the flow...:) keep wroting...
p.s: pardon me m not a regular reader...but i ll keep droppin in now n den:)

blogrollin u!:)

nasha said...

seems like u had a bad day when you wrote it
expressed it well..
nicely written!

Karthik[:)] said...

@divsi
Thank you
Need to update regularly too for u to drop in and find new stuff :-D

@nasha
Thank u
Guess it was a pretty bad day

sridhar said...

Dude what's your name
your poem wasn't lame

i think your fans will increase
as long as you continue to cater their needs

keep these poems coming
your talent is mind-blowing

Karthik[:)] said...

LOL
Good one mate
thanks :)