Saturday, April 11, 2009

The Surrender

The crunching of the leaves, filled the night around
Footsteps followed the tranquilized breeze downtown
The mind in an absolute state of confound
Hoping the serene surround would clear the rebound.

The scent of the fresh soil lingered in the air
The rain drops descended the heaven's stair
It was a moment meant for all to share
But the place was engulfing him in despair.

As the lightning streaked across the sky
He let out a feeble and beaten sigh
The solitary abandonment he wanted to deny
But the beauty of nature seemed to make him defy.

The rippling of the water captured his mind
Fascinated was he to see the land and water entwined
As he made his way across the bridge, to nature resigned
His melancholy now seemed to have pined.


iceman said...

what hath the heat of phoenix done to thy?

Rag said...

First of all!
Welcome back again!! :)

beautifullly written!!!
Poetry was something that was missing on your blog!!

Karthik[:)] said...

dont ask buddy..have gone crazy...the heat has got to my brain i guess and fried up my circuits :D

thank you thank you :-)
i just hope i dont go into hibernation yet again hehehe

CHEEKU said...

loved that line
"rain drops descended the heaven's stair"!!
Good one da.. But did I get what you exactly meant.....?? I am not quite sure!

Sindhu Anand said...

Didn't know you were into poetry! Nice one! :)

Karthik[:)] said...

dont worry it was intended to make ppl not understand..kind of a mystery ;-) hehehehe and off course thank you :-)

well sometimes i do write :-)
and i dint know u visited blogs hehehe especially mine :D

kish said...

Ah man, this is refreshing. loved this line- 'Fascinated was he to see the land and water entwined'

Ashwini said...

Sigh!! Me likes ya :)